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Justin Walters's avatar

Thanks for the thoughtful feedback Nicole!

Yeah, early on I wanted to exclude the aliens from the pitch. I introduce it to the story in a unique way, but it's hard to describe it in the pitch.

I had some people say I shouldn't exclude it -- but I might try excluding it on my next round of pitches.

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